Of course! :D I just got to play through the extended demo and it was really great! I love the added features(and I had a much better date this time)! While I was playing, I picked up some grammatical errors, spelling errors, and sentences that were maybe a bit hard to understand, so I wanted to share them with you:
When the mall mascot wants to tell you his story, one of the options is: "Heard his story" when it should be "Hear his story" as it is present tense.
Haato speaks to the VA receptionist with the cat ears and says: "Oh, that's anti-climax." The proper word would be anticlimactic, as in, "Oh, that's anticlimactic." Haato also speaks in past tense and says, "... shota got corrupted..." but it would make more sense if it was "... shota get corrupted..."
In the streaming interview with Hikaru, the interviewer says, "Wow, I'm sure your fans is really happy." fans is a plural, so it should read, "Wow, I'm sure your fans are really happy."
When the VA receptionist is speaking to Haato in his apartment, he says, "One of the 'rabbits' is now escorted to hospital and we'll go live in one hour!" The sentence reads strangely to me. I feel it would read easier if it said something more like, "One of the 'rabbits' has been escorted to the hospital and we'll go live in one hour!"
VA Receptionist also says, "By rabbits, I mean people wearing rabbit costume and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show." Again, this sentence reads strangely. I think it might read better along the lines of, "By rabbits, I mean the people that wear the rabbit costumes and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show."
Haato says, "Alright, let's do this fast and get those money!" it sounds better as, "Alright, let's do this fast and get that money!" (I suggest this only because I have heard people say it this way before)
When Haato speaks with Hikaru, Hikaru says, "It's okay if I'm the one who do it." It should be, "It's okay if I'm the one who does it." There is also a small spelling error when Hikaru says, "Anyway, your should get the fuck out of this room now." 'your' should be 'you' in this case.
That's all I have noticed for now. I plan to replay again and try some different things too. If I notice anything else I will be sure to let you know! :)
Just curious: are you thinking about making physical copies available for purchase? I will definitely pre-order the digital download for myself but I would like to give the gift of BL come the holiday release season.
Played the demo, and so far this game is really cool - I can't wait to see the full release.
I like the job system, and some of the other mechanics that are not implemented yet will be pretty nice too, I'm certain.
And of course, the art is so pretty... Can't wait for the CGs!
The only complaint I have are the prices of items like books and food at the restaurant (this is expensiiive and obviously unrealistic), but I suspect this is intended for the player NOT to be able to purchase these things in the demo. Am I right about that?
I'm curious - if exploring the right locations at the right time, is it possible to meet all of the cast in the demo?
Prices of books and foods is expensive because they enable you to learn "Traits", which will be necessary for certain jobs. So yeah, they're not really meant to be too cheap because you can only purchase each food once =)
For your second question, nope. In this old demo, you can't meet certain casts because you can only meet them starting from Week 3. We'll be releasing new demo next week, so please wait for it! :3
Ooh okay, I understand now! Maybe it would be interesting to tell the players about the food and books thing somewhere, somehow? When you see the very cheap clothing and then the very expensive books or food... it looks like the prices should have been the other way around. I mean, in a realistic way. While if the player knows about it, it makes total sense!
And thank you, that's good to know, so I won't freak out trying to meet everyone and not managing to do so haha!
Oh, and another small question. You said in the game description the climax of the romance doesn't happen by the end of the game, and you play being in a relationship and all that stuff for a while. This is the only aspect I'm worried about because when you do that, the risk exists about the romantic path becoming less interesting after that. So, do you have events planned for that or anything similar? I see things like fight are possible, but I guess this is something else.
We will keep it in mind (the explanation about books and foods, maybe will put a tutorial somewhere in final game!)
And regarding the after-lover life, what we're trying to do to make it interesting enough would be:
1) You can already become lovers in half-game. You and your partner's love is blooming, but you don't know all about them. There are things that they're still hiding from you, and the main arc of the love interests itself only start after you become lovers for certain time (not a super heavy conflict tho, this is a lighthearted game :3)
2) There are still lots of events that you can get ONLY after becoming lovers: hot spring trip, ski trip, night dating events (during weekend dating period) to name a few. It's an incentive to make you want to become lovers as fast as possible.
3) Cute stuff like receiving messages every night from your lover
4) Foreplay mode? It will have collectible kinky outfits (cat costume, etc) & toys, which hopefully makes each sexual encounter more interesting. Haha xD
It's a nice touch to add so much events exclusive to the love life, and the first point in particular is interesting. I mean, the part about learning some major things AFTER the relationship started.
Well, I guess that'll be all as far as my questions go - thank you for answering!
DECEMBER Dear Lord... Never in my life I've wanted a year to end faster... Anyway this new demo is so fantastic I'm already saving money to preorder. You just wait and soon I'll throw my dollars at you \o/
Hi! I'm really interested in this game, and I'd like to know if there are plans for a Steam release with an R18 patch maybe? Thanks for reading and sorry for bothering you! <3
I'm not sure yet. Maybe we'll do it, but it would be several months after we release on itch.io / directly to our website since Steam requires various modifications such as the achievements system =)
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I kinda just wanted an excuse to talk about it... I'm really looking forward to the game! :D
Thank you for spreading word about the game! =D
Of course! :D I just got to play through the extended demo and it was really great! I love the added features(and I had a much better date this time)! While I was playing, I picked up some grammatical errors, spelling errors, and sentences that were maybe a bit hard to understand, so I wanted to share them with you:
When the mall mascot wants to tell you his story, one of the options is: "Heard his story" when it should be "Hear his story" as it is present tense.
Haato speaks to the VA receptionist with the cat ears and says: "Oh, that's anti-climax." The proper word would be anticlimactic, as in, "Oh, that's anticlimactic." Haato also speaks in past tense and says, "... shota got corrupted..." but it would make more sense if it was "... shota get corrupted..."
In the streaming interview with Hikaru, the interviewer says, "Wow, I'm sure your fans is really happy." fans is a plural, so it should read, "Wow, I'm sure your fans are really happy."
When the VA receptionist is speaking to Haato in his apartment, he says, "One of the 'rabbits' is now escorted to hospital and we'll go live in one hour!" The sentence reads strangely to me. I feel it would read easier if it said something more like, "One of the 'rabbits' has been escorted to the hospital and we'll go live in one hour!"
VA Receptionist also says, "By rabbits, I mean people wearing rabbit costume and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show." Again, this sentence reads strangely. I think it might read better along the lines of, "By rabbits, I mean the people that wear the rabbit costumes and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show."
Haato says, "Alright, let's do this fast and get those money!" it sounds better as, "Alright, let's do this fast and get that money!" (I suggest this only because I have heard people say it this way before)
When Haato speaks with Hikaru, Hikaru says, "It's okay if I'm the one who do it." It should be, "It's okay if I'm the one who does it." There is also a small spelling error when Hikaru says, "Anyway, your should get the fuck out of this room now." 'your' should be 'you' in this case.
That's all I have noticed for now. I plan to replay again and try some different things too. If I notice anything else I will be sure to let you know! :)
The game will be proofread later on when the script is complete :)
Just curious: are you thinking about making physical copies available for purchase? I will definitely pre-order the digital download for myself but I would like to give the gift of BL come the holiday release season.
We will sell physical copies upon game release :)
noooooo im done with the demo nooooo please i want more time to play i don't want to spend $24.00
Hello! Question, how do you play the demo on a mac?
Uploaded Mac standalone version build. Check out the demo section! =)
Awesome!! Thank you so much!! :D
Played the demo, and so far this game is really cool - I can't wait to see the full release.
I like the job system, and some of the other mechanics that are not implemented yet will be pretty nice too, I'm certain.
And of course, the art is so pretty... Can't wait for the CGs!
The only complaint I have are the prices of items like books and food at the restaurant (this is expensiiive and obviously unrealistic), but I suspect this is intended for the player NOT to be able to purchase these things in the demo. Am I right about that?
I'm curious - if exploring the right locations at the right time, is it possible to meet all of the cast in the demo?
Prices of books and foods is expensive because they enable you to learn "Traits", which will be necessary for certain jobs. So yeah, they're not really meant to be too cheap because you can only purchase each food once =)
For your second question, nope. In this old demo, you can't meet certain casts because you can only meet them starting from Week 3. We'll be releasing new demo next week, so please wait for it! :3
Ooh okay, I understand now! Maybe it would be interesting to tell the players about the food and books thing somewhere, somehow? When you see the very cheap clothing and then the very expensive books or food... it looks like the prices should have been the other way around. I mean, in a realistic way. While if the player knows about it, it makes total sense!
And thank you, that's good to know, so I won't freak out trying to meet everyone and not managing to do so haha!
Oh, and another small question. You said in the game description the climax of the romance doesn't happen by the end of the game, and you play being in a relationship and all that stuff for a while. This is the only aspect I'm worried about because when you do that, the risk exists about the romantic path becoming less interesting after that. So, do you have events planned for that or anything similar? I see things like fight are possible, but I guess this is something else.
We will keep it in mind (the explanation about books and foods, maybe will put a tutorial somewhere in final game!)
And regarding the after-lover life, what we're trying to do to make it interesting enough would be:
1) You can already become lovers in half-game. You and your partner's love is blooming, but you don't know all about them. There are things that they're still hiding from you, and the main arc of the love interests itself only start after you become lovers for certain time (not a super heavy conflict tho, this is a lighthearted game :3)
2) There are still lots of events that you can get ONLY after becoming lovers: hot spring trip, ski trip, night dating events (during weekend dating period) to name a few. It's an incentive to make you want to become lovers as fast as possible.
3) Cute stuff like receiving messages every night from your lover
4) Foreplay mode? It will have collectible kinky outfits (cat costume, etc) & toys, which hopefully makes each sexual encounter more interesting. Haha xD
I see - it definitely seems interesting them!
It's a nice touch to add so much events exclusive to the love life, and the first point in particular is interesting. I mean, the part about learning some major things AFTER the relationship started.
Well, I guess that'll be all as far as my questions go - thank you for answering!
Do you have a planned release date yet?
Official Kickstarter release date is Dec 2017 (lots of things to do left xD)
DECEMBER Dear Lord... Never in my life I've wanted a year to end faster... Anyway this new demo is so fantastic I'm already saving money to preorder. You just wait and soon I'll throw my dollars at you \o/
I'm so excited :D Definitely going to pre-order once I have the extra money.
Yay, thank you ^^
Hi! I'm really interested in this game, and I'd like to know if there are plans for a Steam release with an R18 patch maybe? Thanks for reading and sorry for bothering you! <3
I'm not sure yet. Maybe we'll do it, but it would be several months after we release on itch.io / directly to our website since Steam requires various modifications such as the achievements system =)
I see! Thanks for the reply! =D